| Again with this piece i was toying with the idea of having her on the floor and not being visibly with it, in a dream like state. this also nicely encorpourates the background. However, there is too much movement in this piece from her. I want her to be virtually still. What if just her lungs were moving and the blinking of her eyes? i think that would be more effective. I also enjoy the paleness to her skin, she looks almost like the stereotypical princess. Like she has been lying there for ages and her skin is thinning through lack of movement. |
| So originally i thought this was a great idea, like yes, i'll get her to twitch as though she is malfunctioning. No, i find it funny, comical to watch. I suppose you may think that she is not functioning right, but no, this film doesn't set the tone that i want it to. So this is the end of this film. |