The second zine here: it comprises of hand drawn pieces. This is definitely not suitable for my work and i will continue to use screenshots from my films. They work well adding to the story and blending bits together.
The zine on the right: Here it lists who is speaking, like a script. This is interesting. I don't think i would do mine in this same way as i don't want there to be a dialogue going on. However, i might list when she is talking: speaking out loud, thinking, shouting. I could also do movements, for example: stand up, breathing pauses. These certain bits could be in bold or italics - i think this is definitely the way forward.